Not yet finished but have to let it go temporarily in progress site.

So this is what I am turning in, I am proud of myself of getting this far, knowing how behind I have been running all project, that being said I believe it tells a cohesive narrative, Some things that need to be changed I feel the type is a bit clunky on the secondary headings on the illustrations. overall the illustrations I believe work, and overall are cohesive with each other, however a little work can still be done especially on the last. I like the postcard theme and follows closely to my original concepts,  However, I feel that it needs more well placed interactive elements to push it further. I believe that some well placed jquery could be real effective in making the site more dynamic more surprising and a bit more captivating. Especially with the narrative text.

http://web.pdx.edu/~trace/Art342_Sp015/Art342_Proj1/

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